Sunday, 31 July 2016

How do I write a movie script if I only can come up with set pieces and one liners?

Steal, steal, steal.
Two quotes to live your creative life by:
Neal Adams: "An amateur borrows. A professional steals"
Anon: "To steal from one source is called plagiarism. To steal from many sources is called research"
So, let me introduce you to the Fine Art of Stealing
What Neal Adams meant was that everyone is influenced by those that came before them. However, those influences are really obvious in the work of the amateur but a professional makes them so much a part of their work that people don't see the original source.
That's your job.
The best way to do that is to steal from many sources.
Take parts from various sources, mix them all up and make them so much your own that people will think that it's original.
OK. Here's how it's done.
1. Sort out your set piece
For example, you may conceive of a scene where the antagonist and some goons have jumped from an aircraft with a kidnap victim and the protagonist leaps after them and must overpower the goons and the antagonist, rescue the kidnap victim and get a parachute before becoming a red splatter painting on the ground.
2. Now pick the characters
Who is the antagonist? Who is the protagonist?
Pick your favourite antagonist and favourite protagonist. Go back to your favourite movies and pick the best bad guy (or girl) and the best good guy (or girl)
For the antagonist, I always like Hans Gruber from "Die Hard".
For the protagonist, how about picking a lady and one of advanced years at that? American women are always complaining that there aren't enough good roles for older women - with some justification. So, how about Helen Mirren's character from "RED"?
3. Now rewind the action
How did they get on the plane? Why the plane? Was the protagonist there by design or accident? I prefer accident because there are so many more options for stories.
Why is the antagonist kidnapping the victim from a plane? Well, it's a good way of not getting followed which is why our protagonist has to pursue them without a parachute.
But kidnapping someone from a plane is crazy with all of that security? What if that's the whole idea? The kidnap victim's bodyguards won't have side arms so if the antagonist is prepared with (say) plastic guns or the like, then the fight is one-sided. Hmm, plastic guns are a little silly. Or how about they're blackmailing the Air Marshall and he simply hands his gun onto them. Suddenly, they're armed and no one else is.
Do you see how the story is forming from a single set piece? And we haven't even talked about the kidnap victim yet. What if it's a young girl whose father is a bio-weapons specialist and the ransom will be that he gives up a dangerous bio-weapon? I "researched" that character and storyline stright from "Resident Evil: Apocalypse".
Now, let's give the protagonist the ability to win. She is a retired military intelligence officer who worked during the end of the cold war and the Afghanistan war in the 80s who is now retired. She was one of the many back-room people who keep operations going. So she has basic weapons training and some martial arts training like aikido where age isn't an issue. But what she still has is the mind to win.
OK. So now we have a retired intelligence officer on her way home from visiting the grand kids who gets caught in the middle of a kidnapping and must use her wits and whatever is freely available inside an airplane to foil it to save the girl and an awful lot of potential victims.
You could also mix and match elements from "Air Force One", "Passenger 57", "Executive Decision", "Non-Stop", etc.
All from a set piece.
Is it a good story?
I don't know. I made it up on the fly (pun intended) to show you how it could be done.
And it doesn't matter if it is rubbish because it's given you something that you can re-work. What do you think Hollywood gets it right first time every time? Yeah, right

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